Throughout this amazing pattern of things you actually receive a B+ for effort. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was first on the particulars. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you just what did work. Your text is definitely rather engaging and this is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not convinced of just how you seem to connect the points which inturn produce the actual final result. For right now I shall yield to your point but trust in the future you actually link your dots better.