Throughout the great scheme of things you'll receive a B- with regard to effort. Where exactly you confused everybody was first in all the particulars. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more accurate in this article. Having said that, let me reveal to you what did deliver the results. The text can be quite persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can see the jumps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of just how you seem to connect the ideas that produce the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position however trust in the future you actually link your dots better.