In this wonderful design of things you receive an A+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was first in all the details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate right here. Having said that, permit me say to you what exactly did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be highly engaging which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can certainly notice a jumps in reason you make, I am not certain of just how you seem to unite your ideas which in turn help to make your final result. For the moment I will subscribe to your point but wish in the future you actually connect the dots much better.