In the excellent design of things you'll secure a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you misplaced us was first on all the particulars. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct here. Having said that, permit me inform you exactly what did do the job. The article (parts of it) is definitely very engaging and that is possibly the reason why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can certainly notice a leaps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not sure of exactly how you seem to connect your details that make the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but trust in the foreseeable future you actually connect your facts much better.