Throughout the awesome scheme of things you secure a B+ with regard to effort. Where you actually confused everybody was in the details. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did work. Your writing is quite convincing and that is probably why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can certainly see a jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily convinced of how you appear to connect the details which inturn produce the actual conclusion. For now I will subscribe to your issue but trust in the foreseeable future you actually connect the facts better.