In the excellent design of things you actually receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost everybody ended up being on all the particulars. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, permit me say to you exactly what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is actually rather convincing and that is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not confident of just how you appear to connect the ideas which in turn make the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you link your dots much better.