Throughout the awesome scheme of things you'll get a B+ with regard to effort. Where exactly you lost everybody ended up being on all the specifics. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, allow me say to you what exactly did work. Your article (parts of it) is certainly very engaging and that is probably the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can see a jumps in reasoning you make, I am not really confident of exactly how you appear to unite your details that make the conclusion. For the moment I will yield to your point but hope in the foreseeable future you link your dots much better.