In the great scheme of things you receive a B- just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost us was first in the particulars. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be more accurate here. Having said that, permit me say to you just what exactly did do the job. The writing is certainly extremely powerful and this is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of just how you appear to connect the ideas which help to make your conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your position however wish in the future you link the facts much better.