In the amazing scheme of things you'll receive a B+ just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually misplaced everybody ended up being in the particulars. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me tell you what exactly did give good results. The writing can be extremely powerful and that is possibly why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can certainly notice the jumps in reasoning you make, I am definitely not certain of just how you seem to connect your points which help to make the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the near future you actually link the facts much better.