Throughout this wonderful scheme of things you'll secure an A+ for effort and hard work. Where you actually misplaced everybody was in your details. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more true at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you just what did work. The article (parts of it) is definitely very engaging and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can certainly notice a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not convinced of exactly how you appear to connect your points which inturn produce the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your position but trust in the foreseeable future you connect your facts better.